Thursday, 5 March 2020

Atlantis

This story about Atlantis I really enjoyed writing it but using my imagination so hope you enjoy reading it.




In the deep blue sea  there was a lost city could
Atlantis it had fled a long time now one  how it
happened but it was a long time ,”Oh grandmother
please tell me more.” 
I will tell you when you go to bed my  dear.” “Okay.”
“It all started in 1980 there was a city could Atlantis it
was the most beautiful place in the world and benise 
the city was the most beautiful blue sea felled with
sea animals.” “People of Atlantis loved to swim in the sea.
They had the best mearis of Atlantis.''

But their meairs did not last long. One day there was  a
big storm. The city fled the lights extinguished solely. 
The water started to rise the animals were swimming
higher people drowning everybody was screaming
shouting there was crying in the air the way crashed to
the buildings.
 There was a mermaid watching this happen. She was
hiding behind  a rock watching the people screaming and
the City fled. She couldn't do anything because she
mustn't be seen by the people of Atlantis.

The sea animals the dolphin the turtle and the killer
whale were her friends their names were Flipper,
Flounder And coral.Then she Goodnight stay in watch
so she went to help the humans she was able to save a
mother and a child the little girl told her that her dog
was silt in the water she quickly dived into the water
and saved her dog .

She was proud of herself and swim away then there was
a big wave the  mermaid head power so she was able to
stop the wave and save the people of Atlantis.Then
she went back and the only people knew about the
mermaids good deeds was a little girl and the dog

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Shamili
    My name is mapa. I am a student at may road school in room 15. I really liked the way you described the story alantis and I liked the way you put speak marks in your sentence and words. But have you thought about finding mistakes and fixing them. Ka pai

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  2. thank you Mapa for your kind words and I well work on the mistakes and for you keep bloging

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