My world adventure holiday

This is a Recount about my amazing holiday recount is something that has happened before and you are writing about it now. I have used a text her and some similes to make my week how interesting for the reader to read.

My world adventure holiday

On Friday me and my mum went to the
Princess dress shop in New Lynn.
when we went
inside I was Frozen like a Ice cube I couldn't even move .
Because there were the Most beautiful  sparkly dresses
I've ever seen in the world .
my  eyes were wide  as  a big circle .
I couldn’t Say a word to my mum when we got 
into the shop I was running
around the shop and looking at the pretty dresses.
They were so beautiful .
But my mum said we cant buy any of the dresses
I was so heartbroken
I was about to cry .
But my mum said we can buy Some  slime for me
.I was happy after my  mum  said we can buy slime for me so we 
Bought  all the stuff that we need and then
we were driving home
my mum decided
to buy us some KFC .

After we bought KFC   went back home.